the English language is not Oriental, notes on Episode 5
I am losing adjectives to describe your work. I am going to restrict myself to only a few.
You are a specially gifted writer
Beautiful interposition of the Indus Valley Pics with the story. Excellent use of graphics!
Mata Hari! Where did she come from? Have you been studying World War 2?
An Earthquake. By the way, earthquakes are my worst fear. I fear being buried under rubble, dying slowly. Allah forgive me. Wow! The possible ways in which The Indus Valley civilization ended - floods or river reorientation, or war!
Again, wow!
Brilliant job!
This is fast becoming a series - and it's something to look forward to each day!
Thank you.