notes on Episode 4
Excellent work.
9.7.2800? That is your 816th Birthday! Happy Birthday! Ze Heroine of Ze Story!
Speculative fiction is a difficult genre. The future that a writer writes about should be believable and relatable to the reader. The way you have written about 'China versus ZE US,' and the shelling which destroyed Europe, Climate Change, and screens instead of words - no talking - it looks believable. The submerging of Amsterdam! Hologram communication!
Ice box and defrosting - a little bit of Brave New World!
Believable. Enthralling.