lovely! Notes on Episode 6.
I remember reading about Daleep Singh somewhere - the uniqueness of his birth and heritage.
You're getting better at this, I swear.
No poke poke, no joke joke.
What I like most
- You introduced a character in the last episode and she is still around
- You have the ability to intertwined the time travel with important personalities and significant events in the world. That's a real talent!
- Your ability to introduce accents into the written prose - adds a wonderful topping to the cake!
Thank you!